
Last year I went to the sea with my family. My brothers were played football. Also, my sister was cleaned and helped my mother. Moreover, we cooked in there. The food was delicious. I enjoyed with them. Also, we washed the dishes together. And we sat on the beach. We built houses from the sand on the beach. My sisters and I collected the shells from the beach and the beautiful forms. We swam there and we enjoyed. And my brothers had skied on the sea. I want to ski, but this is not allowed in my family. And most importantly, we spent a good time with family. In the end we went back to the house.
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ReplyDeleteVerb errors:
1. My brothers were played
2. my sister was cleaned
3. my brothers had skied
4. I want
All of these should be simple past.
I think you had a great time at the beach, and I'm sorry you didn't get to ski.